Writing

LAVA NARRATIVE: DAY 1

1. Check out this picture. What do you see? Can you describe the emotions of the volcano on this day?Happy ,excited ,joyful ,delighted and overwhelmed with joy .
2. Continue your story from yesterday, and be sure to include the descriptions your class came up with in your writing today. 

Begin writing here:

There was Once a small and isolated island where this young beautiful , smart and coruis girl lived. She was known as Ava she was the daughter Alina (the god of the land ).One day Ava was walking across her island that she was born on (Hawaii ).While she was walking across the beach at Hawaii she saw the  volcano she was told that only people who are related to a god can talk to the volcano.Ava went to the volcano she found out the volcano's name was Solomn although he was very happy he was very lonely on the inside .He would watch all the happy couples playing on the beach and having fun , as he would just use his  imagination  that he had someone that he can play with .Ava would see Solomn be happy but she would notice that he is really lonely on the inside.Ava had a idea since her birthday was coming up she got to have whatever she wanted.A few weeks went past and then it was her birthday.Ava had the birthday of a lifetime then she got to chose one thing she wanted this year.Ava said loud and proud to her mum  ( Alina )”I want you to make a girl version of solomn “.Ava hoped she did the right thing as a friend to Solomn. Her mum said “ are you sure Ava? “.Ava said “ yes” Her mum made a girl version of Solomn everyone called her Samantha.Samantha and Solomn became best friends and had the best life ever until Solomn started to sink.Until one day he fully sunk and was never to be seen until.Samantha would always remember the song Solomn  would sing to her , she would sing it everyday.Until Solomn started to grow again and then Samantha had her best friend back and they would sing the song everyday so it would stop them from sinking , and they lived happily ever after.